You have a good concept, but honestly I had a hard time following you through bullet points 1 – 4.

The first two stuck with metaphorical language about shirt sizes and I started to lose the connection between shirts and work responsibilities. The last two shifted almost entirely to concretely talking about new projects, new skills, and sloughing off old responsibilities.

I think your ideas would have come across more clearly if you had focused on the metaphor at the beginning for about a third of the content and then shifted cleanly to focusing on new skills, projects, etc. for the remainder of the article. Mixing the two throughout the entire article was confusing, at least to me.

Your guest post intrigued me enough to check out your own site. You’ve got a lot of solid content. You post frequently, which is great. I look forward to seeing you grow as a writer.

My pleasure Nick. Thanks for your great post.